Friday, July 21, 2017

Little Ones. Comments

Rating: 5.0

From light to dark they
fly. Touching the ground,
Touching the sky. These
little, white bugs. That
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Rebecca Navarre
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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 October 2021

Little things are beautiful...innocent, pious and sinless....A beautiful poem....5 stars.

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Unwritten Soul 24 July 2017

This is wonderfully done, beautiful is where your words lies on it...it has subtleness that make this poem sound peaceful. Loved it Rebecca

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Rebecca Navarre 25 July 2017

Thank You! ! ! Soul, That Is A Beautiful! ! ! ! ! And So Kind, Of A Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry So Deeply Flows, Like A Beautiful Shinning River, Under A Sun Set So Gold! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 July 2017

Ejphemistically inscribed. Beautiful and meaningful poem. The little white bugs.. leaving mg heart.. Gods wonder... I appreciate this poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Rebecca Navarre 25 July 2017

Thank You! ! ! Kumarmani, For Such A Very Kind And Thoughtful Reply! ! ! ! ! Love Reading Your Poetry That Is So Heart Felt And Inspiring For Everyone! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Laurie Van Der Hart 21 July 2017

Lovely that you notice them, Rebecca. And are filled with awe... What bugs are these?

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Rebecca Navarre 22 July 2017

Thank You! ! ! Laurie, For Being So Kind! ! ! ! ! I looked it up...There were a few, but, not certain. None were harmful at least! didn't think of that..Don't know, but when the light hits these little ones, they glow with a like, , :) Magic...Of Gods Show! ! ! ! ! Your Poems Are Ever So Beautifully Heart Warming! ! ! ! ! And Wonderful! ! ! ! ! This Please Know....! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! !

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