Little Willie 22 Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Little Willie 22

Rating: 5.0


Little Willie, on the slide,
tore his trousers open wide.
Everyone could only stare
at his bright red underwear.

Wednesday, April 19, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: clothes,clothing,humor
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is my first attempt at writing my own Little Willie adventure, so I didn't want anything too drastic to happen to him in this first one. That will come later.

Update: 15 May 2017 This used to be Little Willie 09. The first eight were not my own work, but were found in an old book. Now I have discovered a ninth Little Willie poem in the same book, but in a different section from the others. Rather than re-numbering all of nine through twenty-one that I have written so far, I will just re-number this one and leave the others as they are. Then I will add that other Little Willie poem from the book and it will become Little Willie 09.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Spock The Vegan 20 April 2017

Great start. Is it tore or is it torn, perfectionists can be a thorn. : -)

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