Live Conversation Poem by Fatima Obaid

Live Conversation

Rating: 3.0


In the winters gloomy night
Within the sparking of the moon's light
My one glimpse on my wooden tab
made me to stick on my writing pad
it was being written by golden pencil
by the sweet flurry angels
they were preparing a piece of paper
Where my deeds were to be written
Suddenly a storm came
And vanishes all the angels
A huge Silence appeared
and all the light disappeared
after the time of the few second
An echoing thing called out
Don't know what was it?
A sound of Human or the silence? ?
A strange voice, it wasn't a voice
with my confused mind
many questions were asked to me
Many answers were given by me
At the end I asked
who is the one am talking to?
One answer or feeling came
you are having Live conversation with God..

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
i just wrote it without any rhyme..
thanks to Payal For correction.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Lacovara 05 November 2013

A lovely free flowing poem that speaks to the poet in all of us! Nicely done! PEACE

0 0 Reply
David Wood 04 November 2013

A delightful poem I enjoyed reading

0 0 Reply
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 01 November 2013

Wow such an angelic touch poem pennd with a fine poet's pen. Thumbs up.! To sense God's presence is the greatest feeling. Pls do coment my latest poem.

0 0 Reply
Sierra Perez 01 November 2013

I think it is rather pleasant...just needs to flow a little more. Otherwise Nicely done Fatima Obaid

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success