Live In You Poem by Amitava Sur
Live In You
I love you, live in you, long you so much -
You - a priceless rose, sunken with morning dews
Glowing so afresh and sizzling with your alluring youth.
You're my southern wind during spring time -
Mildly blowing over - cooling my heart and soul.
A maddening odor you always carry with you
From the garden fresh body and soul within you.
I keep on gazing at your wide open eyes
Where I dip, I drown and I swim in that swan lake.
I love you, live in you, long you so much -
Your soft and sweet chiming voice makes me an addict
I get mesmerized and I'm lost within you.
With your warmest touch and glance - I'm so electrified
Momentarily I feel to be in the seventh sky.
When you embrace me with your soft kiss and a hug
Ambrosia ambrosia …. I am lost in the land of love.
Butterflies … honey touch … gleaming stars … in Paradise
We are in floating cloud …. where the moon winks with a smile.
I love you, live in you, long you so much -
Don't leave, depart me not even in nightmare
You loved me endeared me won me … for ever.
Now I cannot breath a moment thinking without you
Made me such an addict - cannot live but you.
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Amitava (15.03.2014) 6-00 am, at dawn
A great tribute to the one you love. Powerful words expressing the depth of your love.
A very passionate and emotive write overflowing with tenderness and a kind of adoration for the one you love! Powerfully expressed! I have already commented on your poem.... A Strange Peddler!
Very beautiful expression of your love. Great imagery and emotion seeping through. Please keep writing, you are very good at writing of and from your heart. A wonderful tribute to the one you love. RoseAnn
Thank you all the respected poets who read this poem and appreciated with your valued comments.
This poem is a priceless rose in the bouquet of your poetry, remembered it and wanted to read it again. Such a beautiful expression of your love, Amitava.
Very lovely and expressed with such emotion that it's bursting with love. What a lucky girl she is!
A good message for me too, like to share with my better half and say her - I love you, live in you, long you so much ' A beautiful write. Thank you for sharing.10/10 Regards.
A good message for me too, like to share with my better half and say her - I love you, live in you, long you so much ' A beautiful write. Thank you for sharing.
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12/8/2025 3:47:31 PM # 1.0.0
The longing for the one you love is so well expressed. A great write!