Living Lovely Portrait Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Living Lovely Portrait

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Just visiting market I have come
The memory is shining in mind
So many sellers and many buyers
They exchange ideas with wealth.

Some buy vegetables and crops
Some buy clothes and machines
They take these for their families
Entirely this is mysterious.

Law of action has tied thread
To have drama on this stage
There is proper calculation we see
They are just paying their prices.

Living lovely prorate is painted
On this canvas of amazing ground
Lovely proletariat is living in hope
Father of heaven is great law maker.

Tuesday, December 15, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life,lifestyle,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 15 December 2015

Yet another beautiful poem on nature with amusing lines...10 Law of action has tied thread To have drama on this stage There is proper calculation we see They are just paying their prices.

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Aniruddha Pathak 13 August 2019

The poet in his own inimitable style has painted a portrait of what Lord has done on this stage. 'The law of action' and reaction comes to play.

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Dr Antony Theodore 12 August 2019

Living lovely prorate is painted On this canvas of amazing ground Lovely proletariat is living in hope Father of heaven is great law maker... the true law maker is God the Lord and Father. thnk u dear kumaramani for this great poem. tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 April 2016

Law of action! Thanks for sharing.

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Hazel Durham 15 December 2015

The world is a stage and we are the players in all the drama, as we live our daily lives like the hustle and bustle of a market colourful, buying or selling we all pay the price for good days and bad days but the will to survive makes us strong! Great write!

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Rajnish Manga 15 December 2015

It is indeed a lovely poem having philosophical undertones and based on a metaphorical situation of a market place. Thanks for sharing the same. I shall quote some of its lines: Lovely proletariat is living in hope Father of heaven is great law maker.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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