Lol Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Lol

Rating: 5.0


Laugh out loud sweetheart,
I know you are amused,
but I prefer to smile without a sound.
For me it's language of love,
that I speak when I kiss you,
neither you can see it,
nor I can see it,
but there is one in us who feels it,
when that one feels we also feel,
I am sure when we smile in love,
that one also smiles.
What that someone does
is either heard,
or seen,
or at least felt throughout the whole universe.
Your lol is restricted to this atmosphere,
my lol is universal sweetheart!

Tuesday, March 10, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 11 March 2020

LOL.. Spiritual logic on love, a lovely piece

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 11 March 2020

LOL SIR LAUGH LOUD THEN SMILE AFTERWARDS KISSSSSSSSSSSSS FOR A LONG WHILE AND SEE HER SMILEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 March 2020

A lovely poem sir! I would like to cite the reflexive expression, " I am sure when we smile in love/that one also smiles" ......beautifully penned......10+++

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Mahtab Bangalee 10 March 2020

love there is love romantically grasp the universal sweetheart

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