MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.


~ Lolololololol! ~ - Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ LolololololoL! ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
April 27,2010.

Give me that
Stupid intelligence
To underunderstand
Intelligent stupids!

Give me that
Deaf eager ear
To listen
Euphonic cacophony!

Give me that
Blind veritable vision
To view cyclorama e’er
Argus-eyed view ne’er!

Give me that
Rocky ricrac heart
To embellish emblazon
Bonanzas of smiling Daisy!

I shun revel wassail
Normal senses
They’re indeed
Foolery formal
Petite elfin normal!

I’m Ms. Nivedita no
Stickjawed poseur
Au fait mandiblectual
LolololololoL!


Comments about ~ Lolololololol! ~ by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

  • (12/15/2010 3:00:00 AM)


    Intelligent stupids boy have seen a lot of them when drink is around including myself and you bisect it with wisdom words as usual Niv in your original style...magic...10/10...regards (Report) Reply

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  • (7/8/2010 3:41:00 PM)


    I’m Ms. Nivedita no
    Stickjawed poseur
    Au fait mandiblectual
    LolololololoL!

    screaming for an urgency to see various faces of a so called 'intellectual'....a pretense can't survive long and at the same time steal the credit while an 'intellectual' shies away...is lost before found....'stickjawed poseur' defines the intensity experienced by a fake to overcome weaknesses, inability to be....what shouldn't be...LOLouuuud....
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  • (6/20/2010 3:29:00 PM)


    Reading poem and some comments my feelings are

    I’m Ms. Nivedita no/Stickjawed poseur/Au fait mandiblectual /LolololololoL!

    Here Poet expressed and used [unsavoir] words and concepts…may be they’re reading it textually…or idiosyncratic to accept it …poetry is vast esplanade…readers have right to comment and critique…i sincerely welcome it… honor too..

    We’ve seen many pseudo intellectuals and get mileage and byteage but true intellectuals are behind the screen…or under the carpet…

    The word used by Poet [confessed with honesty] ‘no poseur’ ‘stickjawed- mandiblectual…her utter helplessness she feels…

    We must read in-between lines

    Poet writes, ‘I shun revel wassail/Normal senses…actually these are nothing but ‘abnormally normal’ … [concocted, masked senses] …here she retorts and justly…what is called normal senses are they without matching with true to aesthetics.....many such are flooding PH

    Post modern type poem with a definite message…

    10++
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  • (6/15/2010 12:52:00 PM)


    A very weird and slack jawed poem for some folks to enjoy. Keep on writing and I soon will began to understand your poetry. Lynn (Report) Reply

  • (6/13/2010 12:44:00 PM)


    What I’ll do if I’m with zero aesthetics…Give me that/Rocky ricrac heart/To embellish emblazon/Bonanzas of smiling Daisy! ’ fine finery of feelings…

    Indeed what we claim as Knowledge may be half learning…vide infra

    Poet satires with, Give me that/Stupid intelligence/To underunderstand/Intelligent stupids! [Note 'underunderstand']

    Excellent ‘poetic-remembrencer’ and memo to me
    10++
    dr. sakti
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  • (6/4/2010 12:45:00 PM)


    True Poetry de-cranes our false ego…slicing satire into miniscule…

    So many intellectuals are there who claim and create hype and hoopla by pet ‘yes-man’ media soon but soon disdained by true lovers of intellect aesthetics

    Thanks …indeed good poem
    10++
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  • (5/22/2010 2:46:00 PM)


    Highly sarcastic poetry …

    Like beware of [being] ‘mandiblectual’…and warning poster in front of them…

    Poseur or pseudos…are trash…just show piece…like white elephant
    10+
    AB
    London
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  • (5/19/2010 10:48:00 AM)


    Poet is courageous as ever…phew out so called ‘Au fait mandiblectual’…

    Terrific write up with trendy English and coupled-words…

    Her grit I salute …
    10++
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  • (5/11/2010 10:33:00 AM)


    Quasi and pseudo intellectuals are master in complicating simple things…

    Poet’s imageries are wisely designed…hey such intellectuals hearing the poet’s appeal…

    Be not a poseur…be guileless and see white as white and black as black…okay
    10+++
    Dr. V
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  • (5/10/2010 3:29:00 PM)


    Surrealistic poem…where bow and swing of images…and contradictory and paradoxical…may seem to readers

    Nice word coupling ‘mandiblectual’ intellects are petrified in mandible …good word satire…

    Poet is transparent and outspoken in say…admits not intellectual she is …as like many poseurs
    10++
    PO PO
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  • (5/9/2010 5:51:00 AM)


    'Give me that
    Stupid intelligence
    To underunderstand
    Intelligent stupids! '

    And of course the title of the poem make me laugh with joy at you child like nature even though you have a mature way of writing poetry.

    I must share this with some one; Lol
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  • (5/8/2010 2:59:00 AM)


    Well you started this craft with stupid word and line...so I guess this is stupid all the way. I mean you played with strange and funny lingo and it is undecipherable for me. At least this is a unique and weird form of poetry or expression. (Report) Reply

  • (5/8/2010 2:56:00 AM)


    Well you started with a stupid word and line...and I think this craft is also stupid in nature. You play strange and funny words which are undecipherable. At least this is a unique form of poetry. Thanks (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/7/2010 6:49:00 PM)


    Give me that
    Stupid intelligence
    To underunderstand
    Intelligent stupids..... hi let us remain stupid intellegent only.. nicely presented feeling.. liked it most.....10

    read mine m in tears...at least say no
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  • (5/7/2010 6:34:00 AM)


    You definitely have a way with words, and i am sure you have the intelligence that assists you in using those words to create wonderful poems - with a difference (Report) Reply

  • (5/7/2010 5:15:00 AM)


    mandiblectual? Maybe I'm the only one who doesn't know what that means. Is it a mix of mandible and intellectual, as in you speak you mind and individuality? I'm pretty sure I liked it even without understanding the last bit (Report) Reply

  • (5/6/2010 6:37:00 AM)


    lollllllllllllllllll............. (Report) Reply

  • (5/5/2010 3:34:00 PM)


    fantastic one.. enjoyed it alot (Report) Reply

  • (5/1/2010 2:33:00 PM)


    ‘Petite elfin normal! ’, ‘…Nivedita no/Stickjawed poseur/Au fait mandiblectual’

    It’s a poem with some difference …what is claimed by so called Intellectuals Poet has put humorous hammered satire and its just…

    Poets must have free flow of emotion like ‘Rocky ricrac heart’, ‘…emblazon
    Bonanzas of smiling Daisy! ’

    A crispy poetic treat …thanks for sharing…
    10++
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  • (4/30/2010 3:35:00 PM)


    An eye opener poem here ‘Intelligent stupids! ’

    Used as a symbol who is masking and quasi or quarter [or less] intelligent.

    Actually such persons are high nosed and upstart.

    A good joke ‘He is great Pundit who can make simple thing complex and complex into utter complex’…

    Another is ‘Intelligent is one who writes more foot-notes that true notes’…lolol

    Better to underlearn from suchs…nice wording and concept navigating thanks
    10++
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 27, 2010

Poem Edited: Thursday, May 6, 2010


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