Sun shine

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Loneliness - Poem by Sun shine

In the loneliness of night
i feel the appearance of someone;
who is with me..
with the twinkling stars present on the sky; ;
ensure me not to weep;
and preserve me in the company of innocence, ,
and appeal me....
not to commemorate; ; ;
THE PAST DAYS! ! !


Comments about Loneliness by Sun shine

  • Geetha Jayakumar (12/8/2013 11:14:00 AM)


    Beautiful write. Past is over never to come back. But loneliness is telling you something. Loved it. (Report) Reply

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  • Yasmin Khan (7/12/2013 9:24:00 PM)


    Some visions are always there when we are lonely, a good write. (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (7/7/2013 1:20:00 AM)


    for a poet loneliness is the gift.past is never to come back. look at the sky stars are smiling commenting on you. listen what they r saying. (Report) Reply

  • (11/23/2012 6:11:00 AM)


    The power of your poetry is a marvel to me here! This kind of writing is rare and I appreciate you for it. The past has to be now reversed into a super future that can make you a happy bard.
    Dear Sun Shine, Thanks a lot for reading my PLAYING A HOST FOR YOU. You would have made the evening brighter with your shine and I am sorry for not having mentioned your name there. Probably you might have come and sat somewhere away from my sight then...
    I will surely call you for the next get together after the DOOM`S DAY and when your future too begins to be much more redeemable.
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  • Indranil Bhaduri (9/19/2012 2:53:00 AM)


    Beautifully expressed.. Touching! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Eindaray Kyaw (8/31/2012 11:44:00 AM)


    You can compose will enough about lonliness! (Report) Reply

  • Abdallah Gamal (8/31/2012 9:37:00 AM)


    Speechless! It's very emotional.. I can relate to it :) 10+ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 31, 2012



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