Sudipta Bhattacharyya

Bronze Star - 2,421 Points (02.01.1976 / Berhampore, Murshidabad, west Bengal)

Loneliness - Poem by Sudipta Bhattacharyya

I don't know whether your muteness
Is just your personality or not.
I always take life as easy as downy flake
In winter morning, sweet yet mute like you.
Your appearance sometimes create commotion
Through my evey vein & spine, though you are silent.
I know not if muteness is another part of loneliness.
If that is so, I wish your mute appearance.
For I know my loneliness is because of your muteness.

Topic(s) of this poem: romantic

Form: Imagery

Comments about Loneliness by Sudipta Bhattacharyya

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (7/25/2016 9:46:00 AM)

    Lovely lines that are loadedwith lonliness. (Report) Reply

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  • Dinda Khairani (12/9/2015 11:33:00 AM)

    The way you express your feeling is actually make the poem more beautiful.
    Thanks for sharing.10
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  • Edward Kofi Louis (11/29/2015 5:55:00 AM)

    Mute like you; but, with a vision. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Beach Girl (11/25/2015 10:30:00 PM)

    I really enjoyed this poem. In just a few words you aptly expressed how this persons silence causes oyou to feel lonely, but yet hopeful (Report) Reply

  • Seema Jayaraman (11/18/2015 6:40:00 AM)

    Silence can speak volumes.. yet it can cause feelings of pain and loneliness.. thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Shakil Ahmed (11/18/2015 5:03:00 AM)

    beautiful love poem, the poem has expressed your heartfelt thoughts, well penned thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 18, 2015

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