Wednesday, August 31, 2016

Lonely Star Comments

Rating: 4.5

In the deepest darkest night, a lonely star survive's. With it's
guiding light, I'm trying to make it threw this night. That only star, that lonely star, shinning down, while I stare blindly threw
these tears. Wishing that, that only star, that lonely star would
guide you here to me tonight. For I need you so, my heart won't let
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Rebecca Navarre
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Khairul Ahsan 14 May 2018

A wonderful poem. Liked these lines: 'Wishing that, that only star, that lonely star would guide you here to me tonight. For I need you so, my heart won't let you go.'

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 November 2016

In the deepest darkest night! Nice piece of work.

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Rebecca Navarre 17 November 2016

Thank You! Edward, That Is Very Kind Of You! I Look Forward To Reading More Of Your Wonderful Writing! ! ! Many Blessings! ! !

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