Lonesome Poem by mohit soni

Lonesome

Rating: 5.0


I am lonesome tonight
without you my love
I feel deprived

I look at the doorstep
and think you would be here
I gaze at the moon...and
picture you there

Come back again
coz now this pain
seems intolerable
in this rain.

Come back again
and introduce me to the sun
I am in dark
frozen and stunned

come, come and touch me
and make me free from this
silent seclusion
hold my hands and take me away
beyond the reason

let the blood
runs throughout my veins
I need you dear
Come back again

Bird of your memories
in an endless flight
with thousands of pain
I am lonesome tonight.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Babatunde Aremu 18 July 2012

Very romantic and emotional. This is recommended for those in love. Good and easy to understand.

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Kasia Fedyk 18 July 2012

How beautiful, longing, sensual expression of the heart, Monti it is such a lovely poem it touches my heart, it is like a song sang of love.

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Romeo Della Valle 22 July 2012

Bravo! A reservoir of meaningful words and rich imagery embedded on this well penned and poignant write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo-New York City...

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Apurva Jain 17 July 2012

Come back again coz now this pain seems intolerable in this rain. beautifully written... :)

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Sh J 02 October 2013

awsm poem....i like it alot. vry hrt touchng.

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Zoya Khalid 10 August 2012

this reminds me of Elvis Presley's song- Are you lonesome tonight do you miss me tonight are you sorry we drifted apart does your memory stray........................... Do the chair in your parlor seem empty and bare do you gaze at your doorstep and picture me there is your heart filled with pain.shall i come back again tell me dear are you lonesome tonight? ..........................

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simple and elegant. Try reading my love poems and take pleasure to comment pls.

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Ramesh T A 28 July 2012

Plight of loneliness well expressed in this poem!

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Sanjay Mehta 27 July 2012

incredible....thanks for sharing.

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