Long Journey Ahead Comments

very nice and original idea relayed in this poem. thanks for sharing.

The start of the journey of life.....a very original write...not many of us have ever thought of our birth process..

You offer a side of life that we don't often think about. Luckily we do not remember how we first came into the world. Excellent insight, Sathya! A '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

what a wonderful poem sir.....a born child forced away from the safety of its mother's womb to the world that's mean...10

seemingly simple but obscures a very deep meaning in the way that we humans rejoice in the painful helpless cry of a child who hs been ripped off the security of its mothers womb and enters the cruel steely world of cold emotionless eyes--butiful potrayal -full 10+++++++++++++

surreal experience...a peek into the mind of the just-born!

Wow it's very expressive in many different ways beautifully worded

an inspiring and has a deep meaning to it.. very outstanding