- Longer Days/New Neighbor (Haiku, Senryu) - Poem by Ben Gieske

Ivor Hogg (11/20/2009 2:30:00 PM)

Strictly speaking ben both are terse verse Neither complies to the syllable count but none the less both have great impact ivor (Report) Reply

Meggie Gultiano (11/8/2009 2:38:00 AM)

Another excellent piece, Sir Ben...Love it (Report) Reply

Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (11/6/2009 6:12:00 AM)

Both excellent poems Ben and it is good to see a haiku and senryu side by side to note the difference of the forms. I can relate to the longer days as with daylight saving, we have heaps of time to catch those morning melodies. I will go for a look at moonset too and see what beams there! 10 Karin (Report) Reply