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- The Sunshine Of My Life (Etheree)

Rating: 2.9
you
sunshine
to my face
your warmth I feel
sleeping in the grass
I love your satin dreams
floating in your cotton fields
promising hopes and burning fires
you are spring and seasons long where all
begins and blossoms rue through you and me
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Ken E Hall 21 February 2010
All the words gel together like sunshine seasons enveloping love with the warmth of sunshine, a poem that does not come all that easy with this excellent standard Ben ++++10+ regards
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Indira Babbellapati 17 December 2009
it flows like satin...
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Ritty Patnaik 16 December 2009
dear ben, i know exactly the feeling of this poem.great write, and i really enjoyed the warmth seeping in with closed eyes and day dreaming......sometimes i wish there was more time to stand and stare at natures unblemished beauty..this goes down as my favourite..thanks. ritty
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Meggie Gultiano 12 December 2009
love your satin dreams floating in your cotton fields ...................................... marvelous lines, Ben..so deserving for publication. I really admire your works, Sir.. Shalom. Meggie
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Zachary Glitch 12 December 2009
I applaude the beauty and flow of this marvelous piece. It deserved to be published.10.
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took me home to the Caribbean.. when i used to lay on the grass with my dogs.. a fantastic piece
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