Longing Poem by Adrian Antique

Longing

Rating: 5.0


My frail eyes …
Quite hazy
Staring blankly
At the city lights -
Dashing and glooming,
Subtle figures, fading …
Far horizons, sinking.

Aboard, a dozen of souls
Whose hearts' fire
Are quietly dim …
Hoping to be rekindled
By the presence of someone
Or somewhere
Perhaps, home.

Dropping off and walking through
Feeling the soft brushes
Of the cold, cold wind …
Staring at the glistening stars
Reminding me of someone
From somewhere
Perhaps, home.

Maybe, just maybe
These bittersweet thoughts
That becloud my mind
Are simply giving hints
That I'm longing for someone
Or somewhere
Perhaps, home.


Joshua Thomas Aguinaldo Antique 6.1.22

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is a collaboration with my son, Joshua. Most of it is really his. But it talks about our deep longing for home. And our true home is where his mom is.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
ER Bron Chiong, RSW 18 June 2022

YO! A gr8 c0llab0rati0n j0b, dear fathER and s0n p0ets! Beautifully presented...l0v 8! -- ERBC

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