Mariana Zita

Rookie (September 30 / Guatemala)

Looking - Poem by Mariana Zita

I'm looking for
something I can't

No matter how far
or long I look i can't
find it

I look to the left and
to the right but still
I can't find it

As hard as I try
I can't find what
I need

Without it i am
uncomplete without
it I am not the real me

I need my soul so
help me find it

Comments about Looking by Mariana Zita

  • (7/31/2007 9:54:00 AM)

    Mariana, this is the first poem of yours which I'm reading. and you write well! ! (Report)Reply

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  • Maria C. Pires Costa (7/23/2007 11:49:00 AM)

    You sound very sensitive and anxious.And I guess you are a determined young woman! You seem to be experiencing a very important life stage: with your imaginative work you are contributing to help others! Keep 'trying hard', encouraging others.We all need you and are here to follow your emotions and share your positive feelings. You can make it happen!
    God bless you!
    A big hug, dear Mariana.

    Maria C. Costa

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  • (6/15/2007 11:04:00 PM)

    WOW...u just keep on getting better. u go girl. plz keep wrting. (Report)Reply

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  • (6/10/2007 5:05:00 PM)

    Amazing! Maybe this should be called Can't Find It, but great anyway!
    Keep writing!

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  • (3/14/2007 9:24:00 AM)

    continue the quest marianna

    All the best

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 1, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, January 25, 2011

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