Looking Poem by Mariana Zita

Looking

Rating: 5.0


I'm looking for
something I can't
find

No matter how far
or long I look i can't
find it

I look to the left and
to the right but still
I can't find it

As hard as I try
I can't find what
I need

Without it i am
uncomplete without
it I am not the real me

I need my soul so
help me find it

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Preeti - is here! 31 July 2007

Mariana, this is the first poem of yours which I'm reading. and you write well! !

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Maria C. Pires Costa 23 July 2007

HELLO, MARIANA! You sound very sensitive and anxious.And I guess you are a determined young woman! You seem to be experiencing a very important life stage: with your imaginative work you are contributing to help others! Keep 'trying hard', encouraging others.We all need you and are here to follow your emotions and share your positive feelings. You can make it happen! God bless you! A big hug, dear Mariana. Maria C. Costa

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jazmine kristen 15 June 2007

WOW...u just keep on getting better. u go girl. plz keep wrting.

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Gold Flower 10 June 2007

Amazing! Maybe this should be called Can't Find It, but great anyway! Keep writing! Lilly

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Roger Bowman 14 March 2007

continue the quest marianna All the best Roger

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