Saturday, February 5, 2022

Lost And Found Comments

Rating: 5.0

Near to the edge of the sandy beach,
Stood a building that made me feel sad,
The place where lost children took shelter,
Separated from Mum and Dad.
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Jayne Louise Davies
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Nabakishore Dash 07 February 2022

When mother turned up, their faces lit up.great write.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 February 2022

This is a very sad poem, the title Lost And Found reminds me of my own kid days whwen my dear Mum bought a toy (a small dog in a cage) with the text: Lost And Found. Top score, dear poetess

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 06 February 2022

beautiful imaginative description of the sight!

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Ruta Mohapatra 06 February 2022

I hope no child goes through that...well expressed!

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Jayne Davies 05 February 2022

Thank you all x

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Spelling Police 05 February 2022

SEPARATED, not SEPERATED. Great poem, though!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 05 February 2022

A wonderful poem Jayne

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Unnikrishnan E S 05 February 2022

Very emotionally charged poem. Exquisite. Top score

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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