Neon lights, pubs and malls,
bewildered small town girl
slips out- where night sky...
A nice haiku with hidden meanings. Title itself is very catchy and meaningful.
sudden astonishment on merry and alive styles. Well poem written being Japanese style.
the heat and cold...of these two lights...the village girl feels at home with th sky
a lovely haiku on the city lights that astonish the small town girl.
Wow, the title was immediately captured by my eye, and the content is a perfect haiku.Thanks for sharing, Mamta. With best wishes, Yelena.
Wow! Splendid…and exquisite Voted 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK
very nice Haiku indeed. colorful and bright. take care see my new poems of 2010 on pg1
Beautiful...crisp & hit point blank. We lose all senses amidst these invading artificial lights. Loved it Ma'am, Ranjit.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
How true! The city lights have dazzled me for long! Now I cease to be impressed by them any more! Instead, I have moved out under the open sky and gaze up in amazement at God's galaxies - those 'star cities' in space beckon to me! Which made me to compose three poems -based on Astronomy! Hope you will like them, Mata ji? For your poem 10! From - Raj Nandy!