While raking the bottom of my heart
Carpeted with yellowed withered leaves,
A flicker of hope
Searches for the pink lilac,
That fell from the branch of our love
During the bleak blizzard
Of our long term frozen relationship.
Flow of emotions with great intensity is evident in the poem. Search for the rays of hopes that is pink lilac adds a nice flavor to the poem on the whole. Ten points. Thanks for sharing.
Wish you two help to revive the relationship and stay blessed. Beautiful! !
Heartfelt poem, in love one should have patience to overcome the heartbreak.