Lost Love V1 Poem by Eddi Hong

Lost Love V1

Rating: 5.0


The loneliness he believed.
Cracks down as she smiling.
Caught his attention.
With only her existence.

By the early-summer she came.
With the ice-cream she held.
He felt,
the taste of joy for the first time again.

Days to months they spent.
The dawn with green-field of grass.
The evening sunset of orange.
The night street with tender silence.

'aah this is it..', he whispered.
Another story will be engraved on blank pages.
The sheet of tales will be scripted.
Left to be read by the rests.

The love he received in that summer.
Will never comes again.
As the vow in Spring was delivered.
He concluded that love have shapes.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 12 July 2021

A beautiful love poem, lovely and very passionate....

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 July 2021

Maiden joy....... wonderful

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 July 2021

Lost Love 6, .loveliest rendered, beautifully worded.5 Stars full on TOP! Thank you so much for sharing

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Eddi Hong

Tanjung Balai, North Sumatera, Indonesia
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