The dark blue sky
Hung over the east
Was beginning to have,
The cool orange feast,
The sparrows fidgety chirping
The parrots’ chorus flight
Day was slowly breaking,
The owls went quiet,
The air was breezy,
And loess felt nice
The flowers waved happily
Whose joy would not suffice?
But heart felt a tinge
The body was in pain
As love was everywhere,
But here was in vain
The night was over!
This night was in eyes
New sun shines bright
A lost lover fights!
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Written sometime in 1989
beautiful.............this one is really........beautiful.......well penned
You created such a wonderful backdropp for your poem and life goes on every day, even though one is in pain... beautiful imagery. Excellent. Karin Anderson
Lost lover still had not lost his courage...fine metaphor write..10 Ency Bearis
The night was over! This night was in eyes New sun shines bright A lost lover fights! I think love is actually known to us, when we lose it... George Bernard Shaw said... 'There are two tragedies in life, one is not to get your heart’s desire and the other one is to get it…” I was lost in the imagery of your poem for a while, beautiful indeed… Thanks a lot for sharing this lovely poem of yours…
The dark blue sky Hung over the east Was beginning to have, The cool orange feast, ------- A unique way of opening verse, great imagery used, so poetical. Crafted with brilliance...a 10/10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This too shall pass.......and morning shall come after this night! your poetry appears to say!