Barn’bay To Bloodsbay! Poem by Rajesh Kumar Vaid

Barn’bay To Bloodsbay!

Rating: 5.0


Withered noses smelt blood,
Killed by the fire of the desire!
To taste!
Wolves swam ashore

Fangs spewing staccato venom,
Tongues abrading wounds,
Red seeps slowly,
Lambs are huddled,
Hounding wanton cry of joy,
Barn is burning

Few ears are crying,
Music of the voice of beloved?
Head spins on the spindle of the city
Body is on stretcher
German shepherds tied duty bandana forehead,
Wolves are dead
Shepherd is sleeping!

White capped ears are dud, blunt knife
Others opposites are filled with plastic,
Some think always talking is fantastic,
Numb in emotion, spastic
Tube is inserted in their mouth,
They are gagging now
Hooves on their chest

Denizens of Bomb Bloodsbay, Citizens!
Stand on two legs,
Change the bleating voice
Take back, this is our barn
We have to plant flowers
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Hisar,03, December,2008 after Bombay,26-28, November,2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Very good... Great write Krista

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Reshma Ramesh 02 December 2008

hmmm impressive...........well penned..........

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Deependra Kumar Jha 02 December 2008

Indeed nice composition! I liked the ray of hope reflected in the line 'We have to plant flowers'...

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 December 2008

Rusty minds rusted by rascal teaching and ambition.The culprits are the children of the infamous Master called Satan! ! !

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Dr Kamran Haider 03 December 2008

Vaid Sb.. I have tears in my eyes... Sirf woh log jo insaanyaat ka dard rakhtay hain samajh saktay hain k kaisa lagta hai jab insaanyaat ka khoon huta hai, jab zameen ki gaud laho say surkh huti hai... Jab kisi ghar mein saf-e-maatam bichhti hai... This is really a great poem... Thanks for sharing... Your brother, Kamran

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Michael Gale 08 December 2008

Great poem. God bless the poetical unoppressed-MJG.

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Of course I knew it would be strong and full of angst. 'Head spins on he spindle of the city' did it for me. Powerful imagery. A masterpiece. At last reprieve with flowers.....so so moving Karin Anderson

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Sathyanarayana M V S 04 December 2008

Very very powerful poem indeed..........10

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Anjali Sinha 03 December 2008

nice poem --read mine allah-ram-jesus (aftermath) --10 regards anju

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Mamta Agarwal 03 December 2008

strong worded, impressive write. you have expressed angst, horror, disgudt, compassion and finally need for courage and hope.10 Mamta

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