Lost School Days Love Poem by Santosh Sharma

Lost School Days Love

Rating: 5.0


You and I joined the school on the same day
It was beginning of journey in half senses of life.
Talking endlessly, building castle for life.
Fun, play and mischief’s were as usual as of childhood
Our association grew with the passage of time

Your gleaming face, mystic smile sparked the feeling of love in my heart
The inspiration and concern shown, made me feel, you to be a part of my life.
Without seeing you the days never use to be complete.
Every morning, with some pretension use to be around the school entrance
Your deep sight and blooming face use to enlighten my day
You became the inspiration for my vision
All my actions and achievements use to give more happiness to you than me.


Summer holidays were never an appeasement
Not seeing you use to be a disappointment
Excuses were made best to the wisdom
Some were with profound reason and some were with guilt on the face.
Mom’s permission use to make me fly like a wind

Ferrying around your house use to be adventure of the day
Your one glimpse use to give thrill for few days
Returning home was never more than snail speed.
Seeing mom’s mood, use to enter the house.
Use to open the book, even with out will to read.


Our school fare well became a departure for life
Left me desheartened and many promises unkept
Now the decades have gone even memories are fading
All your knownness were probed best to my wit
No one could give any clue of your where about.
Still there is wish to see you before you could wrinkle
Your place is still vacant at the bottom of my heart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 01 December 2010

Living back to the past memories make us to taste back what was happen few years back, missed and sweet memories... and time make it changed, but the feeling stained irremovable, i love the way u sway the story and words gently....it is like wind hush a great solace tale...keep writing, thanks for inviting and sharing with us about your sweetness, school in memories...

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Kelli Williams 30 November 2010

This is a very beautiful poem. It brings back the memories of your high school love. Really sweet.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 November 2010

Your place is still vacant at the bottom of my heart.... nice o rememeber pleasant school day and it's memory.....10

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Audrey Heller 26 November 2010

Thank you, for your invitation to read, your poem. How it brings back, memories, I imagine to a lot of people. Who, hasn't gone though first love? That's the one, we never forget, as it was just that, our first love! I think most of us, deep inside, wonder, what became of them and which direction, did life take them. In our own way, we hope they found, what they were looking for and have made a life for themselves. I'm sure, they think of us too, in the same manor. A very lovely write and very nostalgic! Audrey Heller

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Redd Juceekittee 25 November 2010

If something or someone is meant for you, it will happen.

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Jinal Oswal 08 February 2012

Wow, it is real sweet... Childhood memories with bittersweet love.

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Ibrahym Oba 01 July 2011

You are great poet, you flashes the memory of the living.But are you not married? I pray you find her.You can read my poem named Eternal love.

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Narayanan Ramakrishnan 08 February 2011

very nice one. it took me back to the mid seventies, when i too experienced all these. now wrinkles are slowly encroaching and, so too, most probably, on that face and skin which i yearn to see.

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Seema Chowdhury 31 January 2011

wow, a nice one. life is a sweet bitter experience of memories and realities and leaves behind a nostalgic memory that haunts us for long.

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Kevin Carney 19 December 2010

Very nicely written, you tell such a bittersweet story. We have our memories that we reach back to and hold on to them. You tell it so well with words that flow and most can relate so well.Thank You for sharing. Great write 10

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