Santosh Sharma


Lost School Days Love - Ii - Poem by Santosh Sharma

Lost School Days Love – II

The storm which took you to the unknown shore
At last, a wind brought you in my dreams
Meeting at the desk which we shared decades before
Ruffling my hairs with diligence and care
The same gleam and blossomed face
The spark of your smile resonate my heart
The turmoil of tears took it’s course
Embraced and clasped till the silver moon
Staring eyes and silence prevailed
Revealed the moments spent in the past
Vanished with a promise to be dream of mine
Will alway be your love, till the existence of life.


Comments about Lost School Days Love - Ii by Santosh Sharma

  • Pranab K Chakraborty (5/15/2011 1:02:00 AM)


    Nice imagery with nostalgic trance makes the writing much poetic. Enjoyed. Write more.
    Regards,
    pranab
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  • (5/15/2011 12:20:00 AM)


    Golden memories are opened before the readers in a plesant manner. friend I love this presentation technique. Good use of imagery is seen throughout. Nice reading. Thanks for sharing. Marks 10 Rekhamandagere (Report) Reply

  • (5/14/2011 9:08:00 PM)


    Indeed, delightfully romantic! Laden with tender affection and schoolboy dreams, forever allurng and tantalizing, yet so innocently sweet, holding the promise of childhood purity and endurng affection. So metaphorically representative of our lost childish dreams which seemed so sweet and untainted by the ugly realities of adulthood's world. Yet again, children are not so innocent, but rather ignorant. I enjoyed it. It is sweet like a spring meadow refreshing anew after the dead of winter. (Report) Reply

  • Cristina Teodor (5/14/2011 7:52:00 AM)


    So romantic, highly sensitive poem. You used such a nice metaphor 'the spark of your smile resonate my heart' just taking the readers breath away. You have such a nice taste in poetry.Nice poem, so touching..Cristina Teodor (Report) Reply

  • Romeo Della Valle (5/13/2011 10:53:00 PM)


    Pure love is always real as manifested in this well crafted and poignant write! Keep it up until you die and millions of ears will hear your message of love loud and clear! You are no alone! I am just by your side my dear friend! Love and Peace for always! ...RDV (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 11, 2011

Poem Edited: Thursday, May 12, 2011


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