Lost Soul Poem by Anna Andrews

Lost Soul

Rating: 4.8


After light, there's dark,
After dark, there's death,
After death, there's life,
For a soul to walk the night.

He shall walk the night, or a day,
Whatever he may choose,
He shall walk the earth to find his lost,
To heal the heart that bruise.

If the love he may never find,
Then may he walk a thousand miles,
As the heart will never heal again,
And the eternal tear will fall,
And drop into a thousand styles.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
tom billsborough 27 January 2018

lovely rhythm and content but there is a typo on the last line.. dropp and in line 8 you have a singular noun heart with a plural verb bruise.

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Lyn Paul 27 January 2018

Thought provoking and beautifully expressed with a title that captures your soul to want to read.

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Savita Tyagi 27 January 2018

Beautifully composed. The soft poetic images that spills with each word. Congratulations and thanks or sharing.

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 27 January 2018

True nature of life; sadness behind every happiness! Very poignantly written, philosophical poem. X+. Thanksfor sharing.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 27 January 2018

The cycle of life and death continues with the walk of the soul, be it through the night or through the day. The soul may walk a thousand miles through the day or wait patiently during the night. A superb theme to work upon. A nice poem. 10 for the poem shared and congrats on being picked as POD.

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Anna Andrews 28 January 2018

Thank you everyone for your kind words, advice & pointing out mistakes. I'm honoured to receive your reviews & happy you enjoyed this poem.

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Anil Kumar Panda 28 January 2018

Such a beautiful poem! ! Touching. Can't avoid cycle of death and life till nirvana is achieved. Thanks for sharing.

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Siddartha Montik 28 January 2018

Nice poem.. with so much embedded Philosophy. Thank you for sharing Poet! 10++!

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Rajnish Manga 28 January 2018

Sweetly told but with a melancholic tone. This is really very sad- 'As the heart will never heal again'.

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Henry Tong 28 January 2018

Wow! I love the way you control the outpour of your emotions and transform them into delicate words.A little recommendation: the last line sounds a bit unfit...

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