One day I stopped believing In you
No longer did your smile
Or your lies of love matter
Your bittersweet words
Lost their sweetness
Your smile mocked
Your lies
Became lies
this one woke me up....i was checking the site half asleep saw you had a new poem listed and had to read it...wow! im glad i did....when you read poems about love gone stale they generally seem longwinded and self pitious....this one shows amazing strength of character and resolve i think every person should have when faced with a stale lover....10!
Jim you have no doubt touched a deep spot in many. An unfed love can die. from Fay, with regard for your caring heart.
Thats happened to me i understand and it becomes deep like the sea
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
and again...wow! ...i think im going to add this to my fav list