Love... Poem by Brian James Caffrey

Love...

Rating: 4.3


Man searches in the garden,
For a fruit to find,

Some say it's sour others pure divine,
The dispute itself as old as time.

Does love bear fruit and produce wine?
Or does it wither and choke in the vine?

Many a man has tasted 'love'.
Some found it sour others like heaven above.

I consider myself lucky for Love I did meet.
For I am a man whose tasted Love and found nothing as sweet.

Thursday, January 28, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: love and art,love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 12 October 2015

Nice work with the muse of love! I am a man who tasted love.

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Ramesh T A 12 October 2015

Love is bitter sweet, say many based on their experiences; but for this poet, it is sweet ever!

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Cheryl Griffith 12 July 2014

Simple and truthful. I like it, it has an easy flow and rhyming scheme and it's catchy.

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Orville Phillips 03 February 2010

To portray so much about love in so few words is an achievement, a good poem!

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Jake Shelvey 02 February 2010

Excellent poem, I consider it an honour to read any one of your poems

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Rajnish Manga 12 October 2015

Love is the basis of everything beautiful in our life or on earth. There are times when people do have conflicting opinion about love but there is no denying that it has a divine connection. Thanks. Some say it's sour others pure divine, The dispute itself as old as time.

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Shahin Latif 12 October 2015

So lovely poem. So lovely poem. Your thinking is good. I enjoyed your poem

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Savita Tyagi 12 October 2015

Lovely poem. Love is always sweet. The tree bearing it may be full of thorns.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 12 October 2015

Theme, diction and style are simple presentation, is exuberant!

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Anil Kumar Panda 12 October 2015

Love is the sweetest thing ever if it is true. Nice drop.

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