Govinda Rimal

Bronze Star - 2,725 Points (02/11/1993 / Bhutan)

Love - Poem by Govinda Rimal

Red heart like the rose,
Twinkling eye like the stars,
And lips is the petal which never wilts.

Your demure soul will smile and flutter in the wind,
It flutters and flutter, to reach my blushful heart.

My heart is open for you,
I will burn the incense,
And light up the candle,
Visit my heart and make it yours.

My heart is for you not to maul,
Don't make it bloody,
Droplet of love will trickle forever and ever...
And even the oceans of water will not wash it clean
Hey… heart is to hoard the love.

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Poet's Notes about The Poem

story of my best friend

Comments about Love by Govinda Rimal

  • Galina Italyanskaya (4/3/2017 3:23:00 PM)


    A charming piece, Govinda!
    Fluent and passionate
    Though, aren't lips plural?)
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  • Rose Kanana (9/12/2016 6:12:00 AM)


    lovely poem with creative imagery in it. (Report) Reply

  • Jadeja Kuldipsinh (4/9/2016 11:50:00 AM)


    Great. keep it up. Govindaji (Report) Reply

  • V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy (3/29/2016 8:40:00 AM)


    Cute, words express a lit of meaning, red carpet welcome to occupy the heart but not to soaked in blood, gud share friend (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (3/27/2016 12:13:00 PM)


    My heart is open for you,
    I will burn the incense,
    And light up the candle,
    Visit my heart and make it yours. Be careful with my heart. do not let it bleed. like your poem. simple and very clear. thank you dear poet. tony
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  • Chinedu Dike (1/3/2016 2:07:00 PM)


    A well articulated love poem, insightfully penned from the heart in poetic diction with conviction. Thanks for sharing Govinda. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

    Govinda Rimal Govinda Rimal (2/4/2016 11:20:00 AM)

    Thank you

    Govinda Rimal Govinda Rimal (2/4/2016 11:11:00 AM)

    Than you for reading

  • Kewayne Wadley (12/24/2015 7:44:00 AM)


    I can't help but smile upon reading.
    Strong show of emotion. Not at demanding.
    Just as it should be.
    KW
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    Govinda Rimal Govinda Rimal (12/31/2015 1:02:00 AM)

    thank you for reading

    Govinda Rimal Govinda Rimal (12/31/2015 12:51:00 AM)

    thank you so much... for reading it

  • Pranayee Gupta Rachamalla (12/18/2015 8:40:00 AM)


    wow! a very nice poem i just love those lines.. red heart like rose, , , Twinkling eye like the stars are so cute......and the line visit my heart n make it yours was heart touching........nice poem....though the words are simple...your poem is much more than that..! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

    Govinda Rimal Govinda Rimal (12/31/2015 12:49:00 AM)

    thank you so much... you made people inspire.

  • Jayatissa K. Liyanage (12/13/2015 8:01:00 PM)


    Youthful clamor for romance, with non-oblivion memories in storage. Nicely written lusty poem for that kind of hearts. Enjoyed reading. Thank you Govinda for sharing. (Report) Reply

    Govinda Rimal Govinda Rimal (12/14/2015 6:14:00 AM)

    thank you too for reading...

  • Clarence Prince (12/12/2015 8:56:00 AM)


    Truly its a nice love poem!
    Thanks for sharing, Govinda!
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    Govinda Rimal Govinda Rimal (12/12/2015 11:53:00 PM)

    thank you... i just love the mysterious beauty of twisting and turning waves of language.

  • Dimitrios Galanis (12/11/2015 6:05:00 AM)


    I will burn the incense,
    And light up the candle,
    heart is to hoard the love= Verses to depict the ideas, imageries, paintings, paint, as needed by the poems.On the right road.Congratulations.
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    Govinda Rimal Govinda Rimal (12/11/2015 6:31:00 AM)

    Thank you...

  • Edward Kofi Louis (12/9/2015 4:03:00 AM)


    Love, true love! My heart is open for you. Nice work. (Report) Reply

    Govinda Rimal Govinda Rimal (12/10/2015 12:30:00 AM)

    thank you so much Edward Kofi Louis...

  • (12/8/2015 11:12:00 PM)


    My heart is open for you
    I will burn the incense
    And light up the candle
    Visit my heart and make it yours. nice wordings and beautifully framed please keep up your hard work
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  • Bharati Nayak (12/7/2015 7:36:00 PM)


    My heart is open for you
    I will burn the incense
    And light up the candle
    Visit my heart and make it yours.- - - - - - Full of beauty and tender feelings, the poem comes from the depth of your heart for the one who is so special in your life.
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    Govinda Rimal Govinda Rimal (12/8/2015 10:19:00 AM)

    I could have cared heart strokes, if this line could rejoin the broken heart...haha. thank you so much

  • E.j. Langley (12/5/2015 10:32:00 PM)


    I like the strong voice to have. I'll look for more of your poems. (Report) Reply

    Govinda Rimal Govinda Rimal (12/5/2015 11:09:00 PM)

    thank you... and help me grow better...

  • (12/4/2015 10:28:00 PM)


    My heart is for you not to maul,
    Don’t make it bloody,
    Droplet of love will trickle forever and ever
    And even the oceans of water will not wash it clean
    Hey… heart is to hoard the love. This lines are beautifully framed. keep it up.
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    Govinda Rimal Govinda Rimal (12/5/2015 11:13:00 PM)

    thank you bro

  • Govinda Rimal (12/4/2015 12:00:00 PM)


    friends i want your genuine comment, please... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 4, 2015

Poem Edited: Tuesday, June 13, 2017


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