Love Poem by Octavian Cocos

Love

Rating: 5.0


You were young and full of life
I was thriving in your eyes,
So I made you a surprise
Asking you to be my wife.

We made love without restraints
And forgot about the world;
How we danced and how we swirled,
Two nice people, two young saints!

And I offered you my love
And you blossomed, I could claim,
For I gave you all my flame
Like the hot sun from above.

Then we climbed a shining ray
Reaching heavens, like two stars,
Passing close to reddish Mars,
Walking through the Milky Way...

* * *
Now, the young age has gone by,
We have left the starry space,
But our souls, so full of grace,
Have remained up in the sky.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 25 August 2021

Beautiful love poem, well conceived and wonderfully brought forth. Thanks for sharing.....

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Indira Renganathan 01 June 2021

Interestingly expressed....5*****

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Deluke Muwanigwa 23 May 2021

A star poem soaring to great heights

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Robert Murray Smith 23 May 2021

Nicely rendered.

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