Love Poem by C. P. Sharma

Silently it has captured my being, I don't want to loosen its string...lovely lines and imagery...Beautiful to read!

'My love is now my honey comb, Lotus ever in my being bloom, Now there is no place for gloom, I am in bliss in love's red room.' Lovely poem, nice metaphor is used.10++

I can think of two words to describe this poem; beautiful and LOVELY! ! ! !

i think i am in love again........................wow! very romantic..............i hope this poem could be an eye opener to those lovers who had lots oflovers and loving another lover.........hmmmmm..........fellows.......... stick to one only..............just think of this poem...see? very lovely...thanks for sharing.......

C p where would life be without love... lovely.. Alf

this is unique one about love sir.. you know many poets have tried to express their feelings or attitude to love, a great poet always try to do something innovative or express himself in a different way, this is nice write sir! ! 10++= with love shan

Flowing beautiful love poem all leading down to the last stanza of delightful words such as honey comb, lotus and love's red room. 10 Karin Anderson

very soft and smooth, i like it!

Such beauty of words dressed your lovely poem. Great end rhymes written...........10

May your love last forever and ever. Very sweet and lighthearted full of promise and hope for the future. '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn