Imperceptible, surviving with no time and space
Or maybe surviving in another thrilling dimension,
Love has its distinct meanings and its grace
For melting cloud slashed sunset, in sweet detention
Always wondering about the uncertainty of life,
Passion is like going to the window to yell.
Carrying oxygenated blood, leading always to strife,
It needs the scorpion because they are friends in hell.
It creates a spiritual awakening, without loving intent
Against love which transcends all logic and time,
Engulfed in flames, burning red-hot mental torment
Blue ocean and thirst for the truth lasting a lifetime.
Like a Caribbean Dream, the settlement of Rainbow Bay
Is the perfect love transcending logic being so strong
That no malfeasance act nor hate can destroy it one day
It bespeaks no selfishness, it can endure for long.
Poem by Marieta Maglas
‘Carrying deoxygenated blood, leading always to strife’ Like loveless life is a parched leaf…love is solace to soul…nice diction 10//10++ Ms. Nivedita UK
my goshhhhhhh...so nice... carribean dreams will fall on southseas and will rise again in the heart to where love and passion takes place...ilike the words u used..so gentle and kind, so sweet and smart...
very interesting poem. i really enjoyed. you selection of words are excellent.
very well done... love beyond selfishness... becomes what it is! good poem!
this is a great poem dear.i really like it huh.good work
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
wow, , , , , your poem is strong, , , , , it awakens my veins...