Love At First Sight Poem by Miss Grace

Love At First Sight

Rating: 5.0


A fancy ball that night
She had tied her bun uptight
Shimmering ball gown perfectly made
Was put on her by her maid
A perfect beauty is what you call her
But she only wanted a husband dear
And that's the thing I was worried about
That's the thing that made me doubt
She went to dance floor and oh god
She fell in love with a man in just an nod
She thought for love at first sight she fell
She thought it would all end well
But she forgot lust is true love is not
Both saw if each other were hot
After a few meets they got married
With the joys of love they got carried
But after a year the love was gone
Only thing left between them was sadness and son
They fought a lot like dog and cat
He cheated on her and she couldn't take that
He said he did it only for fun
Hearing this the lady took out a bullet and gun
The bullet passed right through his head
In a few moments everything was dead
So people follow my honest advice
Love at first sight is only an early demise

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Love at first sight need not be despised thus. Nor should be . Character is what counts. A marriage can wait, until both knows each other well. So also, all the young ones need to know that there are no "designer boys" and "designer girls"

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Sandra Feldman 05 July 2022

Very clever and well written! Thanks for the good advice.

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Nabakishore Dash 05 July 2022

very nice poem MissGrace.More understanding was needed before gun.However your advice in the last line is a precaution for hot love.

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Ramesh T A 04 July 2022

Perhaps speaks louder, dear! Nice composition!

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Part 3. Gun is no solution. Good poem. Most pertinent issue is discussed in the poem loved it. Top score and myfav

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Part 2. Every man and woman may have his/her shortcomings. When in love, we tend to overlook most of them. Once married, the flaws in the spouse come to light. Unless both have the maturity, marriage fails.

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