Love God Poem by Colleen Courtney

Love God

Rating: 4.8


Eros...
The cherub of love
Drawing back on his bow
And letting fly his
Poisoned arrowed darts
Into the hearts of his
Unsuspecting victims.

If love is so grand, so epic
And so wonderful...
Why does everything about it
Insinuate pain and hurt?

An arrow to the heart
A breaking heart
A heart split in two...

Eros...
Cherub of love
Point your bow away from me
Save your
Darted arrows of poison
For others
I want my heart
To remain whole.

Eros...
Cherub of love
Fly fast and heavenly away.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A well crafted piece dedicated to love of God and love for God..................very heavenly................

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Joe Breunig 19 June 2014

An enjoyable piece; anyone is has suffered heartache can appreciate the message of this poem; wonderfully conceived and expressed. -Joe Breunig, Reaching Towards His Unbounded Glory

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Akhtar Jawad 01 June 2014

A lovely poem, but cherub of love, or the Cupid is blind, in fact he simply constrains you to love yourself, and then you look for a mirror, your lover is nothing but a mirror in which you see yourself. If it is a divine love you see Him in your heart and soul. Love is selfless, often the heart is broken, whether it is love of clay or love of the Master of Decay. What ever your determination may be you are helpless in love. This helplessness, is beauty of life. Enjoy it.

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David Lessard 27 May 2014

If we can overcome the pain of lost love, we can love again. nice write

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A beautiful poem of love in worderful language style in created. Liked it.

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Roseann Shawiak 08 August 2015

To love someone means to risk our hearts being hurt, yet we go ahead anyway, not thinking of the pain that may happen, just letting ourselves fall into it's sweet and devastating trap. At times not wanting to even think or try to love anyone. Protecting our sensitive hearts from the bittersweet darts of poison. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Oduro Bright Amoh 20 April 2015

Great piece of poetry keep it up

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Mohammad Skati 20 August 2014

It's a lovely poem by a great poetess. I loved all of it in truth. Well-done.

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Great piece lovely flow

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* Sunprincess * 08 July 2014

........beautiful poem....my only advice is be careful and give your heart away....only after someone gives you their heart first....and after exchanging hearts be very careful....cause now you do not have your heart, but another's which is even more special and very fragile...

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