Love In Dunes Poem by Rini Shibu

Love In Dunes

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The sun sank into the dunes
The wind blew over the sand
Love crept deep inside
As he gazed into her eyes
Lighted the lamp of love
Wrapping her in his arms
Camels on the barren desert
Sang the song of love
Stars twinkled in the sky
Moon kissed the wavy sand
The desert prince has arrived
He took her for a camel ride
And their love story began

Thursday, August 17, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: desert,love,prince
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 08 January 2018

Hi Rini, Very romantic. The backdrop of the poem is set perfectly for creating the optimum effect of love and sensuality.. The tinge of sensuality added by proposing the camel ride is exquisite, fantastic. Congrats! ! !

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Rini Shibu 09 January 2018

Thanks Unnikrishnan for posting your wonderful comments

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 December 2017

Wow Rini, such a Romantic poem Liked the third line most

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Rini Shibu 09 January 2018

Eyes says a lot.. Thanks for reading

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Soumya Ranjan Rout 08 November 2017

The poem is very romantic and it penned nicely.I salute your thought.Thank you for sharing this poem.

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Rini Shibu 08 November 2017

Thanks Soumya for reading this poem Rini

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 August 2017

Romantic love scene has been painted nicely and touchingly. Thanks for sharing.

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Rini Shibu 21 August 2017

Thanks a lot Kumar for your comments.

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Bill Cantrell 19 August 2017

Oh how the wind sweeps the desert dunes, caressing every ripple, they are for lovers, a bed made for looking at the stars at night as they sing the songs of love and to cover from the sweltering heat during the day, wonderful poetry here, where some see death with the dunes, the poetess sees love! 10+++

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Rini Shibu 20 August 2017

Thank you so much Bill for your comments

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