Kumarmani Mahakul

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Love In Palm - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Oh Star! Where are you?
Sun is glazing
I am waiting below sky
I have opened my palm
To catch memory I wish
You fall, fall and fall
Fall down from far.

You fall soon with reflection
That I want to catch to shine
Below warmness of heart
I have kept you ever
With love of misty mind
Fall down in my palm
Oh stars! my dear you come.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,18 August 2015. All rights reserved.

Topic(s) of this poem: hope, nature, night, stars


Comments about Love In Palm by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (12/20/2016 2:55:00 PM)

    Memories. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report)Reply

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  • Akhtar JawadAkhtar Jawad (12/13/2016 9:03:00 PM)

    Hopes end in prayers and prayers end efforts, efforts lead us to optimism, and optimism leads us to God, at the time of death we open our palm with the hopes of a star and die peacefully. (Report)Reply

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  • Aarzoo MehekAarzoo Mehek (12/13/2016 4:00:00 PM)

    Beautifully written... we all want our share of twinkling stars tightly clenched in the fist never to let go of those little happiness. Loved reading it.10 (Report)Reply

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (12/11/2016 7:16:00 PM)

    picture of Kesav Easwaran
    xNicely expressed Kumarmani...tfs
    18 Aug 2015 by Kesav Easwaran | Reply

    picture of Mfena Ortswen
    xSun is glazing, interesting piece.
    18 Aug 2015 by Mfena Ortswen | Reply

    picture of Fay Slimm
    xThat wait with open hand will be answered by the keeper of memory dear Kumarmani. - a lovely read.
    18 Aug 2015 by Fay Slimm | Reply

    picture of Ramin Ara
    xNicely done, , , Sir, , , Thank you.
    18 Aug 2015 by Ramin Ara | Reply

    picture of Angel mia LOVE
    xLovely ink tfs xoxoxo blessings dear
    18 Aug 2015 by Angel mia LOVE | Reply

    picture of Kantanka Addo- Osafo
    xnice, simple and catchy. fine write.
    18 Aug 2015 by Kantanka Addo- Osafo | Reply

    picture of Rohan *******
    xBeautiful imagery sir
    18 Aug 2015 by Rohan ******* | Reply

    picture of Elena S(*_*)
    x Wonderful penning! Your poem reminds me of how powerless I feel when I try to catch a snowflake. It is only when I sit quiet that some of them may lay on my palm. Could it be the same with stars? Hahaha should I try it too? Does it matter so much the moment of catch or is it the time spent in waiting that may inflate the joy of touch?
    18 Aug 2015 by Elena S(*_*) | Reply

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    xLovely imagery here, to open your hand and catch a memory from a falling star...wonderful!
    21 Aug 2015 by Stella Armour | Reply

    picture of Sylvia Frances Chan
    xGreat imagery, Sir! Wonderful poem.
    21 Aug 2015 by Sylvia Frances Chan | Reply
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 11, 2016

Poem Edited: Thursday, January 23, 2020


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