Love is the piercing of your heart
The breaking of its walls
The melting of the ego
The shedding off of pride
Love is the soft whispers
The silent echoes of your longings
The gentle stirrings in your soul
The flame that warms your heart
The melting of the ego The shedding off of pride.... yes listen to the whishperings of love in your heart. you will experience another beautiful world. thank you dear poetess. tony
Love has been captivatingly explained. Beautiful and touching. Thanks for sharing.
Well done. You have a fine control of the language. I don't know whether you are male or female. But your command over words is good. Only 5% of the people/poets on PH have this command.
A warm depiction on love has been done here amazingly. Beautiful poem with stunning expressuon and nice diction.
Beautiful rendition of words to utmost justice. An insightful depiction of the essence and intricacies of love - a spiritual experience that affects one profoundly, nicely brought forth with conviction. Thanks for sharing Cabanes.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The melting of the ego The shedding off of pride... real love is really a melting of the ego and shedding of pride. you have found it my dear poetess how to love............. wish u all success in your love. dev