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Love Letters

Rating: 5.0

When she was far away, to her I brought you near
And in time of discord, for you I intervened
When she's in doubt I told her how you really feel
When you're at fault apologies I brought to her
Loyal I was to you, servile without complaint

Then things went wrong and now far away she is gone
Your heart's burning with rage and in flame now I am
Is that how you repay... what I get in return?
Will blame be my reward for all the tasks I've done

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Ashraful Musaddeq 19 September 2008

A lovely poem, love it.10++

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Dr Antony Theodore 18 April 2019

By fire you rid of me, by fire I will depart The color of my flame, red as your bleeding heart With the smoke leaving me, your dreams have flown away And with tears in your eyes, to them we say goodbye....broken heart. a very fine poem indeed. thank u dear poet. tony

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Rachel Butler 28 October 2009

'Ashes are my remains' Rachel Ann Butler

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Manonton Dalan 02 November 2008

i could imagine what does the third person wishes. well she has all right to get mad for the hope that faded to broken heart...hmmmm... they can't see your hard work... what they want is you. nobody wins this one except the night. my eyebrows kiss each other, my lips parted and my pen drip. very beautiful poem. thanks.md

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Ashraful Musaddeq 21 September 2008

A nice piece with wonderful metaphors,10 for it. Amazing composition, lovely.

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Ency Bearis 19 September 2008

an enticing letters..great verses... A 10 4 this... Ency Bearis

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