** Love Letters On The Sands Of Time **-In Top 500 Poem by ANJALI SINHA
** Love Letters On The Sands Of Time **-In Top 500
From the blood of my heart
The words that I write
Each word that haemorrhaged
The chiseled groove of my heart did tell
my desires
Higher than the mountains
Deeper than the seas
Time will tell-it will tell
From the depths of my soul
The words that I scribble
Each word that catapulted fire
as sweat from my brow, like crystal beads
tell of my love
Greater than the sounds of thunder
Brighter than the flash of lightning
Time will tell -it will tell
From the ink of my sighs
The words fulminated
Each word that conjugated
Spelt with the fountains from my eyes
my passion does tell
On petaled papers of love
Enfolded and recounted
Not tossed to the storms
Or carried with the winds
Time will tell-it will tell
Anjali
04-07-2009
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Once, again, you use images very effectively to convey a meaningful picture. I like these: chiseled groove of my heart ink of my sighs fountains from my eyes petaled paper of love The time will tell-it will tell is very effective.
You have flashes of brilliance in your imagery and your word choices. This is a very wonderful poem. The repetitions build a drum beat of the passage of time, reinforcing your meaning. Thank you for sharing.
i love how this sounds like a folk ballad, the repetition makes it so musical!
Anjali, first time I read your poem and I am mesmerized.It is fantastic.Deep-rooted emotion adorned with beatiful words.Hundred percent marks. Before my reading I find that it was already within top 500 poems.CONGRATS.
Honest revelation of your depth of feelings. Liked the entities you choose for comparision. Superb Anjali. A sweet 10. Ranjit.
this is a fantastic poem! .........thank you for sharing.........10
Each word that conjugated Spelt with the fountains from my eyes Rachel Ann Butler
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 12:49:11 AM # 1.0.0
Anjali, It's simply stunning.congrats! Im too busy to write a lengthy comment at the moment.But as soon as time permits me I'll do so.