Love is the salt, in the life-meal
If you taste it unsalted, many times hurt you feel
Love is something real, you cant pretend
If you have no feelings, give it an end
Love is a combination, that join two
Makes them one with passion true
Love is to feel good with all your deeds
When the phrase 'crazy change' your life leeds
this poem is amazing! it shows major intelligence & creativity, in which i find intriguing. Wonderful work Yiannis!
this poem allows one to take a step back and understand life from a common and ordinary spectrum whilst turning it into something extraordinary and beautiful.
Oh wow amazing the last two lines just made me think.. Thanks Yiannis this is truly a great piece Leah
God's love creates, improves our life and nature, and is responsible for development as well. Nice poem Chandan
Love is a combination that joins two Make them one with passion true. Good poem blended in a couplet.of four stanzas. Sylva Onyema Uba
This is a very nice poem about the love shared between two people and also the feeling as needed to be well rounded and truly see the world. Good piece.
Now please write a contrasting poem about hate and then we will have some reality since the world is actually full of hate and none of us fragmented humans actually knows what pure love it, but we surely do know how to hate.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
your poem is really good and so true