Love Love Love - Tanka Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Love Love Love - Tanka

Rating: 5.0


they were lovers once
emotions ripple in pond
they count what went wrong
the moon is lonely tonight
a white flag of surrender

Friday, December 28, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Darren Jkoeryo 28 December 2018

Fight between the lovers is essential to have deep love.

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M Asim Nehal 02 January 2019

Thank u so much DJ .

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S H 05 January 2019

And what about the love making?

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Nosheen Irfan 28 December 2018

Loss of love delineated so beautifully n artistically.

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S H 04 March 2019

A huge impact poem. Nice work Asim

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Michael Jack 19 February 2019

Ripple in love is like doubting each other. Great poem. Asim loved it.

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Gordon Walter 17 January 2019

Tanka, on love is a good idea.

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Austin DeSouza 06 January 2019

White flag is symbol of peace and love

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 December 2018

Love! Love! ! Love! ! ! Love is all that we need. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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M Asim Nehal 02 January 2019

Thx much my friend Edward K L.

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