poet Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! ! ! ! ! * Love Of Grace *! ! ! ! ! ! !

Quest of moon ruffles the ocean
Betides thrill reeling through waves
Images riffle by queries of ocean
Promise when holds truth by reality.

Colors of rainbow never baffle blue
as gleams of light enlighten shadow
truth eternal bestows beauty of marvel
does sun love tears of sparkling dew?

sweet words of silhouette when whisper
feeling bespeaks beyond space and time
love eternal is mortal true by resilience
never being burden of shadow crunching tears

love excels by assimilation
soul transcends by love of grace
never yet bleeds by pricks of roses
as mystified entirety in communion.

a blazing of glory of oneness in continuum
semblance of unification of own gods
when mingling tones mutter all in unison
onto the end of eternity by resplendent..

Poem Submitted: Friday, November 21, 2008
Poem Edited: Saturday, November 22, 2008

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  • Obinna Eruchie (10/17/2009 8:45:00 AM)

    A poem with beautiful imagery and nicely written.

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  • Rosalita Fernandez (7/9/2009 6:57:00 AM)

    very poetic and beautiful, well written and a good read thank you

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  • Lady Grace (6/9/2009 4:11:00 AM)

    poetic words are sweet when it comes from a poetic lips..gtace

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  • Yana Djin (3/14/2009 5:58:00 AM)

    really beautiful and effervescent

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  • Michaela Tatualla (1/8/2009 4:58:00 AM)

    You are simply amazing! Great write...Keep it up!

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  • Jen Shearer (12/14/2008 10:07:00 PM)

    This piece of writing is beautiful. Keep up the creative work

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  • Jenann Wingfield (12/14/2008 2:17:00 AM)

    Thanks for the invite to read your amazing work! Enjoyed!

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  • Sallie Tompkins (12/13/2008 11:59:00 PM)

    Thanks for the invite to read your phenomenal work. I do believe you are Edgar Allan Poe's brother(smile) . You are your own, and you are unique, rich, and authentic.

    Sallie

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  • Sarah Pajarillo (12/9/2008 3:54:00 PM)

    wow! im really glad you messaged me to read this peice! i really love all the imagery! i like to just close my eyes after i read one of my pieces or one of someone else and just reread it in my head.....its really beautiful!

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  • Charles M MooreCharles M Moore (12/9/2008 3:51:00 PM)

    Having read this work I find it quite religious in it's tone (the eternal love of God) and the images of bleeding roses and bonding of all gods into one, Nice piece of work.

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  • Kassem OudeKassem Oude (12/5/2008 10:54:00 PM)

    Really your writing is baffling, I was delightful by reading it.

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  • Dr Hitesh Sheth (12/4/2008 5:35:00 AM)

    Wonder write,
    But I Like these lines most:
    love eternal is mortal true by resilience
    never being burden of shadow crunching tears

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  • William Jackson (11/27/2008 10:55:00 PM)

    I like the line 'Love excells by assimilation'

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  • Bonnie Collins (11/24/2008 3:05:00 PM)

    The sturucture and the imagery are very excellent, but may I say, I had to read this twice, as I wasnt sure I was following the same path as you had written, it was very good none the less, and if that was your intent, then the poem is very good...

    Bonnie

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  • Ema Nekaf (11/24/2008 11:15:00 AM)

    The imagery and structure is great!
    Great work!

    It kind of bothers me that you stopped capitilizing words halfway through it.

    But it's nothing I can't get over.

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  • Indira Babbellapati (11/24/2008 3:29:00 AM)

    quite transcendental in tone...

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  • Rinzu Susan Rajan (11/24/2008 3:11:00 AM)

    THIS WAS AWESOME

    love excels by assimilation
    soul transcends by love of grace
    never yet bleeds by pricks of roses
    as mystified entirety in communion.

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  • Ency BearisEncy Bearis (11/24/2008 2:33:00 AM)

    an enchanting composition...deep introspective write....great poem..

    Ency Bearis

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  • Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (11/24/2008 12:55:00 AM)

    Dr. Subhendu I wish I could scribble like you. You are too modest. It is a wonderful work of art and judging from other comments you should know this by now. Karin Anderson

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  • Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (11/24/2008 12:55:00 AM)

    Dr. Subhendu I wish I could scribble like you. You are too modest. It is a wonderful work of art and judging from other comments you should know this by now. Karin Anderson

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