! ! ! ! ! ! ! * Love Of Grace *! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! ! ! ! ! * Love Of Grace *! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 4.9


Quest of moon ruffles the ocean
Betides thrill reeling through waves
Images riffle by queries of ocean
Promise when holds truth by reality.

Colors of rainbow never baffle blue
as gleams of light enlighten shadow
truth eternal bestows beauty of marvel
does sun love tears of sparkling dew?

sweet words of silhouette when whisper
feeling bespeaks beyond space and time
love eternal is mortal true by resilience
never being burden of shadow crunching tears

love excels by assimilation
soul transcends by love of grace
never yet bleeds by pricks of roses
as mystified entirety in communion.

a blazing of glory of oneness in continuum
semblance of unification of own gods
when mingling tones mutter all in unison
onto the end of eternity by resplendent..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jen Shearer 14 December 2008

This piece of writing is beautiful. Keep up the creative work

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Jenann Wingfield 14 December 2008

Thanks for the invite to read your amazing work! Enjoyed!

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Sallie Tompkins 13 December 2008

Thanks for the invite to read your phenomenal work. I do believe you are Edgar Allan Poe's brother(smile) . You are your own, and you are unique, rich, and authentic. Sallie

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Sarah Pajarillo 09 December 2008

wow! im really glad you messaged me to read this peice! i really love all the imagery! i like to just close my eyes after i read one of my pieces or one of someone else and just reread it in my head.....its really beautiful!

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Charles M Moore 09 December 2008

Having read this work I find it quite religious in it's tone (the eternal love of God) and the images of bleeding roses and bonding of all gods into one, Nice piece of work.

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Obinna Eruchie 17 October 2009

A poem with beautiful imagery and nicely written.

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Rosalita Fernandez 09 July 2009

very poetic and beautiful, well written and a good read thank you

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Lady Grace 09 June 2009

poetic words are sweet when it comes from a poetic lips..gtace

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Yana Djin 14 March 2009

really beautiful and effervescent

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Michaela Tatualla 08 January 2009

You are simply amazing! Great write...Keep it up!

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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