Love On A Hillside Poem by Charlotte Rains

Love On A Hillside

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He recalled the first time he saw her
Dressed up in pink ribbons and lace
No she wasn't the fairest of damsels
Looking shy and so out of place
But he knew right then that he loved her
And he couldn't let her slip away
So he asked to sit down beside her
And he met her again the next day
They wed one bright summer morning
Family and friends gathered round
They swore their love to each other
As the sun was just going down
The years flew by oh so quickly
Their babies were destined to die
They never questioned the reasons
And they never asked their Lord why
They lived all alone on a hillside
In a cottage on a wee bit of land
She seen it as a great mansion
Built for her by his loving hands
They sat on the porch in the evening
He saw her in ribbons and lace
She knew just what he was thinking
Blushing as she touched his face
Some say they still walk that hillside
Picking flowers like so long ago
To place on the graves of their babies
That's how this story was told

Love On A Hillside
Friday, June 29, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: picture
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subhas Chandra Chakra 30 June 2018

What a beautiful way of putting things in order and such a lucid style of poem that flows itself like a mountainous stream. Loved the poet in you. 10++++

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Charlotte Rains 30 June 2018

I feel so blessed by your nice comment. Thank you ever so much.

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Chinedu Dike 30 June 2018

A story of love and tragedy told in eloquent finesse. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Charlotte Rains 30 June 2018

Thank you so very much! So appreciated.

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Susan Williams 30 June 2018

Your rhythm and rhyme are immaculate and being unforced the verses flow like a silken stream. Your story has such charm and draw. 10++++++++++++++++++ and onto my favorite poem list

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Charlotte Rains 30 June 2018

Susan, thank you ever so much! So appreciated.

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