Like a river jumping for joy over shiny grey rocks.
That's how my love felt.
The swirling undercurrent spinning the pearly pebbles every which way,
that's how my pulse raced when I thought of you
Meandering, snakelike, it's water flowed along until eventually finding home.
That's how my confusion became resolution.
Sweeping all in its path, yet giving sanctuary to kingfishers and dragonflies,
is how we protected and nurtured our love.
Sunlight piercing the calm with shafts of golden brilliance, dancing in a glitter array!
Was our golden love, never tobe tarnished but ever glowing.
Eventually, defying beauty in its path, nature leads it to its destiny - the sea,
and unhindered and willingly, like the river,
I am engulfed in a welcomingsea of love.
Innovative metaphors...Nice. Keep the poems flowing from you like the river flows to the sea.
Dear Ravi- I am loving your insightful observations and such kind comments - thank you my friend! Lodigiana xx
that's how my pulse raced when I thought of you Meandering, snakelike, it's water flowed along until eventually finding home. That's how myconfusion became resolution Wow such a romantic master piece. Loved it. 10++++ for the lovely poem shared. Subhas
Clearly Subhas you have a romantic soul also! Thank you for your wonderful words and such a pleasure to share it with you xx Lodigiana
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Engulfed! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Thanks for your kind comments - so appreciate your reading and commenting xx Lodigiana