tanvi damle

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Love $truck - Poem by tanvi damle

I promise myself that I'm not gonna talk to you at all,
but then why do I keep waiting for your call?
I convince myself that you nothing to me mean,
but then why do I of you every night dream?
I know you're never gonna stop by,
but then why do I keep waiting to say hi?
I tell myself that now its never gonna be the same,
but then why does my heart skip a beat on hearing your name?
It's over, I've moved on I say,
but then why do I find it so hard to walk away?
I promise myself that i won't see you much,
but then why do my eyes still for you search?
I tell myself that everything between us was not just right,
but then why do I think of you every night?
I promise to move on, leave everything behind,
but why can't I still get you off my mind?
I know you'll never again by my house go,
but then why do I still keep looking out of the window?
I guess I'll always love you deep down in my heart,
there we'll always be together even if we're far apart.


Comments about Love $truck by tanvi damle

  • Peter StrugnellPeter Strugnell (7/15/2010 7:58:00 AM)

    can't believe i've never commented on this poem before, your sentiments are beautifully well expressed.It's really precise, no wasted words, i like it. I've just written a poem on the same subject, 'I hate myself' but it's not as poetic as yours! cheers tanvi all the best, be lucky in love (Report)Reply

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  • Varanasi RamabrahmamVaranasi Ramabrahmam (2/6/2010 10:28:00 PM)

    A very fine sharing and expression of true love with associated longing, passion and affection. Beautiful verse reflecting the romance within and the intimacy being enjoyed. (Report)Reply

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  • true Little angel ...! ! ! (2/6/2010 3:00:00 AM)

    nice.. sweet... love between the tongue of mind and the heart action.... enjoyable.. keep writing (Report)Reply

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  • Lost Poet (2/2/2010 4:47:00 AM)

    cant stop myself reading dis poem again n again.........................really nice work dear..........
    bt grow up n fk dat guy out of ur memories.......may b he dont deserve dat............
    do read mah poem..'i hate her...'
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  • Dr. Ratan BhattacharjeeDr. Ratan Bhattacharjee (1/24/2010 2:56:00 AM)

    Love of a salamander? oooooffffffffff! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
    The title is misleading. Otherwise I could surely ask: For whom? Where? and When? all advervial questions.. he he he
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  • Akshay B (1/23/2010 10:59:00 AM)

    awesome! simply awesome so true in many cases (Report)Reply

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  • Adam ReedAdam Reed (1/23/2010 3:30:00 AM)

    fantastic poem! i think you would like mine called 'i see things'. i think its sort of the same =) anyways great write! (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 23, 2010



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