Mov! Ng On.... Poem by tanvi damle

Mov! Ng On....

Rating: 3.5


I never did want to leave you and go,
you broke my trust which made me do so.
I never wanted to accept what was going on,
I just wanted to keep singing our love song.
Now I'm not gonna listen to what my heart says,
we gotta say goodbye and walk different ways.
I really do wish we could start all over again,
this time without all the agony and pain.
But that never is gonna ever happen,
cuz my heart's just too hurt and broken.
You never kept your promise, your word,
and now I'm just so sick and tired.
I thought you were the one,
but it all ended even before it begun.
You ask me to give you one last chance,
and promise to with me forever dance.
But baby i guess its just a little too late,
I don't think i can forgive and forget.
I never ever could imagine a life without you,
but that is what I should now get used to.
You say, 'Baby come back, no one can ever you replace.'
But then why did you have to break my heart in the first place?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Zakk Burck 24 April 2009

Great poem: D

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C. P. Sharma 24 April 2009

poetic touches but misconceived love. CP

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another really good poem 10+++

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Chitra - 24 April 2009

you seem to have a flair for love poems..sensitive thoughts and intense emotions

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Kesav Easwaran 24 April 2009

sensitive...sentimental...good love poem quarelling type...thanks, Tanvi...10

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 24 January 2010

well penned poem here!

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Malik Crockett 20 May 2009

i been through this same thing a few years ago so i really understand, it's good that you notice that you didnt need to go through that again, so another chance wasnt so.

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Libbie Jones 28 April 2009

I love it.. I can relate to it.. Thank you for letting me read it.. your poem was magnificiant

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Tom Golding 27 April 2009

Some of the painful parts of growing. It's called maturity, so better luck next time. Well expressed.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 26 April 2009

This petty bickering is normal in love................Well Penned............

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