Ernest Makuakua

Gold Star - 9,255 Points (30-09-1990 / South africa)

Love You Made Me - Poem by Ernest Makuakua

You made me a person I thought I will never be
You made me love, to secure everyone's dreams but not my own
But you made me love
You made me to think more about others rather than my self
See love you made me

To love to the fullest and be the biggest among the smallest
But you made me a second chance and they loved me the least
When I thought of giving up in life…
You brought a person that I could attend to rather than my pain

Love you released the sorrows of darkness when you brought eagerness as an angel to my angles of being timeless.
You…revived…my pasts when you went past against part of my past and made me pass to last in life
You made me!

Love you made me to choose response from ignorance of decomposition
I rested from pride and anger the hate well the rage
You again approached me,
With the word of faith to believe in God instead of being bored and stay on board and be abroad and you bumped me against the black board…
Wake up! ! !
To feel the holy spirit in me
Hugh
You
You made me
Love you made me
Someone
Out of something somewhere to see somebody across life that is dodgy
And now I know you made me
Love you made me
ME.

Topic(s) of this poem: love and life


Comments about Love You Made Me by Ernest Makuakua

  • Novoti Gcisakazi Calpurnia Jiya (4/8/2016 7:33:00 AM)


    this is just beautiful :) (Report) Reply

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  • Ernest Makuakua (1/26/2016 4:41:00 AM)


    thank you for your comment very much appreciated (Report) Reply

  • Abhilasha Bhatt (1/15/2016 8:36:00 AM)


    Love give us a different view and dimension to see the world from a different view....nicely narrated....thanks for sharing :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 15, 2016



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