Lovesick Poem by sílvia oliveira


Rating: 5.0


I still house that virus (you) in me
that has slowed me down on daydreams
that has joined my whole blood
that has driven me kind of tipsy...

In the wee hours
the virus has woken me up.
Very early in the morning
it has showed up.
At noon safe and sound
it suddenly appears!
Mostly at night
it¦s there to remind me
it¦s present and powerful.
No need to

I¦ve been already taken
by its invisible-tangible presence...
Its virulence is so attractive
that I¦ve simply abandoned myself
to its comprehensive catching charm...

Don Mcwilliams 03 March 2008

Yes indeed. Love as a virus is so appropriate as a description of the one love in our lives that we will never get over. There is no cure... Don

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Dr.subhendu Kar 22 February 2008

love when intense by the virus as when virulent, as i enjoy the depth of light, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

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Amie-Lee ...... 21 February 2008

I have to agree with my mate Doc there. Good work.

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Romeo Della Valle 05 July 2009

Silvia, I can't imagine Love as a virus, hope it is not like one of those that have not cure the type you just die in pain....Great work, keep it up...Peace, Romeo, NYC...

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Rani Turton 12 June 2008

The title links up with the virus and the idea is really good. You have real talent Silvia!

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John Tiong Chunghoo 12 June 2008

i love this one. you have the element to be great, keep on silvia.

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Alex Tiberiüs 09 April 2008

gostei ^^ i really like it

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 26 March 2008

n ice poems..........

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sílvia oliveira

sílvia oliveira

piracicaba, sp - brasil
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