Humanity Poem by sílvia oliveira

Excellent write Silvia, no problem giving it a ten,10

dear silvia, welcome to the site. only one poem but i love it. a great way to start as it shows you really love to get to know people, especially poets. thanks for comment on my poems and love, john.

dear silvia sometimes some subtleties make a poem lovely. the last stanza somehow takes away some of the sweetness of this poem. yoiu explain something people already know. sometimes it is better not to explain so that the obvious is the honour for the readers - to feel. so haiku.

There will sure be rain in beautiful minds...good poem

yet most humanistic feelings , as when grown in man, like a rose in its brach, we adore peace and love, never being befuddled even by words, war gets away, poem really asui-generis, well penned,10/10, thanks for sharing

Splendid, Silvia. Almost like music. Don

Hi Silvia, welcome finally - love your poem and hope there will be many more to come! !