Lunatic Poem by Anil Kumar Panda

Lunatic

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I will weep for you
Sitting on the edge of water
Where we have not gone
To meet and share love before

You slipped away
Like a dream in early hours
Leaving me in the pit of woe
To get burnt counting the stars

I can see your face
Rising and falling with ripples
The moon mocks at me when
To find path back home I have troubles

Thursday, September 8, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy 16 September 2016

to get burnt counting the stars, well penned, wonder struck keep sharing

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Randhir Kaur 09 September 2016

To get burnt counting the stars... Beautiful

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Anil Kumar Panda 09 September 2016

This what happens to one when he loses his love. Thanks.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 08 September 2016

Narration of the aftermath blues faced after departure of the loved one coming from the bottom of heart.

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Anil Kumar Panda 09 September 2016

Yeah, that is true. Thanks Sir for reading and giving comment.Regards.

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