Hope arises under warmness of heart,
Thought comes like rising sun in mind,
In cold weather feathers muffle a bird,
For a wise journey of life, wisdom muffles.
Furnace of kiln is heated without combustion,
Products acquire warmness in pan of plan,
Span of life is warped by barrier of virtues,
Sins often rupture life's vision and action.
My vision crosses and whispers in galaxy,
Galaxy also mumbles near my homeland,
Worthy trust revives values inside mind,
Vision of mine concentrates in single point.
Vision whispers me to count opportunities,
Vision does not distance me at all from God,
God's vibrations come daily and fall on Earth,
Sun rays whisper to behold knowledge light.
© Kumarmani Mahakul,28 March 2017. All rights reserved.
Hope arises with warmness. This poem is very interesting. A nice poem is beautifully penned.
My vision crosses and whispers in galaxy, Galaxy also mumbles near my homeland, Worthy trust revives values inside mind, Vision of mine concentrates in single point. a meditation, galaxy., very nfine poem. tony
Warm hear feels warm hope. God's vibrations come daily. Leaf carries letter. Calmness is inside own mind. This we should feel. Soul is pure. Nature impacts on soul. This is a great poem and you are a nice poet.
A wonderful poem full of hope and wisdom. Liked the last stanza. A wise and pragmatic approach to life. Very well crafted write that deserves 10+++++
Vision whispers me to count opportunities, Vision does not distance me at all from God, Vision brings us closer to God, life is neither a bte product nor an accident. Writes of DNA confirm there is a writer. A great philosophic poem by thinker of poemhunter.com.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
On a mission! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.