Maffles My Vision Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Maffles My Vision

Rating: 3.7


Hope arises under warmness of heart,
Thought comes like rising sun in mind,
In cold weather feathers muffle a bird,
For a wise journey of life, wisdom muffles.

Furnace of kiln is heated without combustion,
Products acquire warmness in pan of plan,
Span of life is warped by barrier of virtues,
Sins often rupture life's vision and action.

My vision crosses and whispers in galaxy,
Galaxy also mumbles near my homeland,
Worthy trust revives values inside mind,
Vision of mine concentrates in single point.

Vision whispers me to count opportunities,
Vision does not distance me at all from God,
God's vibrations come daily and fall on Earth,
Sun rays whisper to behold knowledge light.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,28 March 2017. All rights reserved.

Tuesday, March 28, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: journey,life,spiritual,visionary
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 31 March 2017

On a mission! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kalpana Barik 28 October 2020

Hope arises with warmness. This poem is very interesting. A nice poem is beautifully penned.

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Dr Antony Theodore 25 January 2020

My vision crosses and whispers in galaxy, Galaxy also mumbles near my homeland, Worthy trust revives values inside mind, Vision of mine concentrates in single point. a meditation, galaxy., very nfine poem. tony

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Pushpendra Patel 27 February 2019

Warm hear feels warm hope. God's vibrations come daily. Leaf carries letter. Calmness is inside own mind. This we should feel. Soul is pure. Nature impacts on soul. This is a great poem and you are a nice poet.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 October 2018

A wonderful poem full of hope and wisdom. Liked the last stanza. A wise and pragmatic approach to life. Very well crafted write that deserves 10+++++

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Akhtar Jawad 09 August 2017

Vision whispers me to count opportunities, Vision does not distance me at all from God, Vision brings us closer to God, life is neither a bte product nor an accident. Writes of DNA confirm there is a writer. A great philosophic poem by thinker of poemhunter.com.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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